IMPROVING MY ART

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pk.. browse through my gallery and tell me what you guys thing What do you guys think i can im prove upon anything art wise,  let me know and don`t be afraid guys i need to hear this stuff please!!!
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Rivalhopeso's avatar
line weight and proportions.

your proportions are msotly style based but you often have hands too small, or even the structure of the faces of your characters are sometimes off. like the eyes too close, or the nose too low, or mouth too big etc. small things.

also your work often has a constant weight to the lines. you should try to vary it more, like have thick lines for darker parts and thin lines for stretched or lighter areas.

there is not much you need to change. your work is great but overall you characters need to look a little more natural since your poses are perfect and awesomely dynamic, so use that to your strength me thinks.