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pk.. browse through my gallery and tell me what you guys thing What do you guys think i can im prove upon anything art wise, let me know and don`t be afraid guys i need to hear this stuff please!!!
Hey Guys Whats up
haven't talked to you guys in a while... how it going ha! Well I'm ok I finished my first year at animation school at sheridan. Learned a lot! but haven't gotten much manga stuff done, hopefully that will change soon. I will also try to make some more youtube stuff too. anyway nice talking to you peps again. tell me how you guys been doing. WHAT YOU UP TO!
READ THIS MANGA IT IS REALLY COOL!!
the name is haikyu is new to jump and i swear its gonna be the next big thing!!
read it at http://www.mangareader.net/haikyu
Manga Update
sorry guys i keep doing this... but i just dont think my art is good enough to show in this oneshot and the shots i choose where every mediocre
looking at it makes me cringe not alot of action till the end So with that said do you guys want me to finish it or no even though the art is not as good as you may expect? tell me what you think im half way through lik 18 pages
I KNOW IM GONNA SOUND CRAZY!!
but hear me out please.. look at my art... what do you see? I just see naruto and bleach mashed into a frenzy to form a weird style that doesnt even look pro!! so what im saying is my style i dont like it and i just looks really flat and boring to be exact and the stories that i did and am currently doing are fantasy type stuff the chi of the dragon, and Excalibur knight which is not even what im into that much im more modern setting type of guy. so im gonna do a style transformation just stop all the projects for like a year and just improve improve improve on my work. I know you guys are like what again!! but i believe this is necessary. B
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line weight and proportions.
your proportions are msotly style based but you often have hands too small, or even the structure of the faces of your characters are sometimes off. like the eyes too close, or the nose too low, or mouth too big etc. small things.
also your work often has a constant weight to the lines. you should try to vary it more, like have thick lines for darker parts and thin lines for stretched or lighter areas.
there is not much you need to change. your work is great but overall you characters need to look a little more natural since your poses are perfect and awesomely dynamic, so use that to your strength me thinks.
your proportions are msotly style based but you often have hands too small, or even the structure of the faces of your characters are sometimes off. like the eyes too close, or the nose too low, or mouth too big etc. small things.
also your work often has a constant weight to the lines. you should try to vary it more, like have thick lines for darker parts and thin lines for stretched or lighter areas.
there is not much you need to change. your work is great but overall you characters need to look a little more natural since your poses are perfect and awesomely dynamic, so use that to your strength me thinks.